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Week 5 - Comment

Christianne's LJ

"For someone whose never written a poem before, this is great! I liked the rhyming scheme too, it all worked very well. It had some great metaphors, like how your mother is a pillar of strength.

The repetition of the last two lines was good too, it really made it stick into my head. Great poem!"
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