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Week 6 - Comment

Lauren's LG

"I really, really liked this!
It caught my attention straight away as I was scrolling down your LiveJournal. The repetition was of course what got me straight away, and I can see how this routine would be stuck in your head, having to do it over and over again.

Great use of rhythm in the piece, I especially liked "The sound, the beat, the aching feet", the sequencing of this was very good. Great work!"
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